literature

hooked on a feeling

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coughing breaks my ribs,
if you would call paper bags stretched over sticks
ribs.


when i look in the mirror
it seems my eyes are getting bigger,
like they're trying to hold
all of the sadness,
draining the rest of my body
and making me weak.


i miss you
i want you
i need you



i can’t sleep,
i hate this 2 am bullshit
and how empty this bed is.


or maybe i don't.
i'm not really confident about this piece because of how short and different it is compared to what i usually submit. so be sure to tell me what you think, and don't be afraid to be blunt or tell me it's shitty or whatever.


but i just had to submit this because i just love this title and it really symbolizes alot for me.



written 5.27.06
© 2006 - 2024 Purpl3Sky
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13spontaneous101's avatar
i personally think that this was amazing! :D